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Annotated Feedback

In relation to the exercises completed in class this week, here is a copy of the annotations we made when we decided to work as a group to improve your work.

Books and Films that deal with Paradox

Hi Alex, I’m excited that you’ve selected Paradox as a focussing point for your theme study. I’ll include here some initial ideas for texts, plays, films and other media, and add to it over time. (Remember you can access the… Continue Reading →

Curley’s wife – character analysis and role in book

‘Cant blame a person for lookin” Curley’s wife is portrayed as acting in a flirtatious manner, as shown by this quote, and due to her being the wife of Curley – the farm boss’s son – is treated with constant… Continue Reading →

Of Mice and Men – Characterisation and character development – Curley’s Wife

Curley’s wife Key quotations- ‘Nobody can’t blame a person for lookin’,’ ‘funny thing, if I catch any one man, and he’s alone, I get along fine with him. But just let two guys get together an’ you won’t talk. Jus… Continue Reading →

Of mice and men -notes

Discrimination: -Disrespect of women-treated as sexual objects, and didn’t have the same rights as men, for example we are not given a name for Curly’s wife, she is just called ‘Curly’s Wife’, showing that at the time women were thought… Continue Reading →

Notable themes to look for in ‘Of Mice and Men’

Friendship/the value of friendship The effect of isolation Presentation of characters

Salinas river area

“Agriculture dominates the economy of the valley. Promoters call the Salinas Valley “the Salad Bowl of the World”for the production of lettuce, broccoli, peppers and numerous other crops. The climate is also ideal for the floral industry and grape vineyards… Continue Reading →

Theme Study: Provisional Theme

Paradox

Futility by Wilfred Owen – analysis

Wilfred Owen’s poem is questioning the hopelessness of war – what is the purpose of mankind if we are only going to destroy ourselves? The poem also questions god; why did god create us, and if he is omnipotent and… Continue Reading →

Controlled Assessment: Spoken Language Study

Comment: I read this essay with a great deal of interest and pleasure. For the most part the effort you made to express it as an impassioned argument was successful. You developed a consistent argument and employed a range of… Continue Reading →

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